Peer Assessment - Dilan's Group

Our group chose to peer assess Dilan's group.
We believed Dilan mainly held a strong pitch, however the storyboard was a crucial faulter in the groups pitch, which we believed could be easily resolved due to a little more time spent planning the general plot.
We felt the storyboard however, the correct version, aside from the mistake of linking physical and mental abuse into the theme of Japan, and the Japanese crisis which happened reecently was a good plot.
However we felt the advert would have been more appealing to the audience if it was about the entire crisis of Japan, not just focussing on one individual, but instead focusing on the turmoil and distress this natural disaster has caused.
The donations were made to be however much selected, and we felt this was a good strategy as it does not apply financial pressure onto the people who are willing to donate.